M- Hey mam would this be your yellow bag?
W- Oh thank heavens! I've been searching everywhere! This bag has my life inside!
Might I ask your name?
M- The names Kai, and yeah no problem! Cant go wrong doing a good deed!
I was tempted to steal the 20 dollars hanging out. Im a little hungry.
W- Hmmm well, do I thank you for going threw my purse? or returning it back too me?
M- Girls and their purses, I swear so intimate.
W- Very!!!! So strange but strangely cute man, could I thank you by grabbing you some lunch? Theres a cafe right around 5th street?
M- I wouldn't mind that, i think I just decided I need to be a little more friendly, and service oriented wouldn't you say?
W- Don't we all!!
M- So anyway...........could I have a name to remember those pretty eyes too?
W- Is there any reason I should give a complete stranger my name?
M- Well I did find your purse, and I am getting lunch with you, a names not much of a stop sign, when your already on the freeway!
W- True, the names Elizabeth, but you don't get a last name, and don't assume your going out with me for lunch, this would be called a pity lunch...... kind stranger.
M- Oh I see, okay well then I'll make sure to order just about everything I want, I mean it isn't a reward without the best thing possible!
W- Your right, but payback bites, and you wouldn't want to smother that good deed now? Satisfy yourself, don't over due it!
Very good! Kind of different with how it all played out but I think I liked it... Great job!
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I like this story, its well written. I like your metaphor of the stop sign. I also like how you at the end you said "satisfy yourself, don't over due it!" Awesome job!
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